I'm not an MTV junkie. I was there when it launched; when all they showed was the same 10 videos every hour. Tennis racket in hand, I became the lead guitar while my siblings made up the rest of the band. Those days are looooonnnnggg gone. I can't play Guitar Hero & the only Rock Band instrument I can handle is the microphone. Which is made even sadder by the fact that I am completely, and I mean completely, tone deaf.
But, I do have teenagers. And, I got sucked into a few episodes of 'If You Really Knew Me'. And, just so ya know, I bawled like a beauty queen on crowning eve every single time. I can't help myself. Kleenex is my only defense against the emotional onslaught.
This got me thinking. As we fashion are characters, we detail their individual biographies. We know everything about them. But, we don't spill it onto every page. There are things that are never translated. So, if you were to pick a character, who would it be? And, what one thing would you want readers to know that is never typed into the tale?
As for me, one of my characters has a quirk where she pinches the inside of her palm whenever she gets stressed. This is borne out of her insecurities & a need to exert emotional control.
Happy Writing,
Patti
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Thursday, December 16, 2010
Monday, December 13, 2010
Hi, Ho, Hi, Ho - 6 Character Mines
Characters populate novels, short stories, jokes, etc. Where do writers find them? Everywhere. The world around us is populated with snippets of character that spark full flying ideas. Here are 6 places to uncover a cast of characters.
I'm just not that interesting - OH, but you are! Your life is fraught with your perspective. And from this, you can draw a host of character puzzle pieces. The crazy uncle, the tee-totalling aunt with the hidden Scotch, that family vacation gone wrong, Christmas with the whole fan-damily. There is an endless supply of ideas from the people in your life. Get out your pick axe & start scratching.
Stranger Danger - Not too long ago, I took my mom-in-law to the doctor's office. Writing book & highlighter firm in my lap, I happily studied along. And then, out of the ether, 2 of the ladies behind the counter began talking. I didn't pay attention at first, and then one of them said, "Her little legs were pumping so fast, flames shot off her heels." Wow! Perfect strangers, to me, carrying on about who knows what. But, I whipped out a pen & paper & wrote it down. Why was she running so hard? Who was she? Where was she going? Sports, in trouble, danger; what could it be? No pick axe handy, I plotted the land to be excavated.
Hey, I know you - Brothers, sisters, spouses, friends - all the peeps in our coop. I'm not suggesting a character study of your hairdresser, but there are events that deserve a little more investigation. Problems arise when we try to dictate the happening rather than allowing it to spark an idea that grows far beyond the person it happened to. Mine events, not your loved ones.
There's this great analogy - I've never killed anyone, but I've hurt people's feelings - intentional, unintentional doesn't matter. The result is the same. I took something that I can't give back. And, from that I can imagine why someone would murder another human being. Why revenge is cold porridge. How a person works to make amends. See, no Colonel Mustard in the library with the knife; but I can dream. Utilize the mining tools, find the situational commonality & from there a character will emerge.
Yeah, I don't remember that - If I have learned anything in this life, it is the universal truth that distance alters perspective. Events from my childhood are simply that, but the host of experiences garnered along the way mold & reshape those. My perspective changes as I grow. Characters start out in Crapville, work their way down the gilded highway, only to emerge in Happy Place, Alrighty Town, or back in Crapville. There are rare gems deposited in our memories; extract at will.
I create my own reality - Whilst traveling down memory parkway, take a minute to stop & investigate the events. Walk around them, feel them & then take them out of context. For instance, in college, I met a really super-smart gal. We became good friends. We had several classes together & thus developed a competition of sorts. Grade comparison ensued. What made us do it? That is the beginning of character development. A driving need to win, to be smarter than, to prove something to ourselves. Anyone of these provides some interesting characters, traits & goals/motivations. Blast the memories to smithereens only to create newbies.
Characters abound. Writers mine for the right one - natural gas, coal, diamonds. We fashion them from the raw to the exceptional beauties they are.
Happy Mining,
Patti
I'm just not that interesting - OH, but you are! Your life is fraught with your perspective. And from this, you can draw a host of character puzzle pieces. The crazy uncle, the tee-totalling aunt with the hidden Scotch, that family vacation gone wrong, Christmas with the whole fan-damily. There is an endless supply of ideas from the people in your life. Get out your pick axe & start scratching.
Stranger Danger - Not too long ago, I took my mom-in-law to the doctor's office. Writing book & highlighter firm in my lap, I happily studied along. And then, out of the ether, 2 of the ladies behind the counter began talking. I didn't pay attention at first, and then one of them said, "Her little legs were pumping so fast, flames shot off her heels." Wow! Perfect strangers, to me, carrying on about who knows what. But, I whipped out a pen & paper & wrote it down. Why was she running so hard? Who was she? Where was she going? Sports, in trouble, danger; what could it be? No pick axe handy, I plotted the land to be excavated.
Hey, I know you - Brothers, sisters, spouses, friends - all the peeps in our coop. I'm not suggesting a character study of your hairdresser, but there are events that deserve a little more investigation. Problems arise when we try to dictate the happening rather than allowing it to spark an idea that grows far beyond the person it happened to. Mine events, not your loved ones.
There's this great analogy - I've never killed anyone, but I've hurt people's feelings - intentional, unintentional doesn't matter. The result is the same. I took something that I can't give back. And, from that I can imagine why someone would murder another human being. Why revenge is cold porridge. How a person works to make amends. See, no Colonel Mustard in the library with the knife; but I can dream. Utilize the mining tools, find the situational commonality & from there a character will emerge.
Yeah, I don't remember that - If I have learned anything in this life, it is the universal truth that distance alters perspective. Events from my childhood are simply that, but the host of experiences garnered along the way mold & reshape those. My perspective changes as I grow. Characters start out in Crapville, work their way down the gilded highway, only to emerge in Happy Place, Alrighty Town, or back in Crapville. There are rare gems deposited in our memories; extract at will.
I create my own reality - Whilst traveling down memory parkway, take a minute to stop & investigate the events. Walk around them, feel them & then take them out of context. For instance, in college, I met a really super-smart gal. We became good friends. We had several classes together & thus developed a competition of sorts. Grade comparison ensued. What made us do it? That is the beginning of character development. A driving need to win, to be smarter than, to prove something to ourselves. Anyone of these provides some interesting characters, traits & goals/motivations. Blast the memories to smithereens only to create newbies.
Characters abound. Writers mine for the right one - natural gas, coal, diamonds. We fashion them from the raw to the exceptional beauties they are.
Happy Mining,
Patti
Thursday, December 9, 2010
Thinkin' Thursday - A Question of Character
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I have always loved Mr. Darcy - the brood. I have read & seen more renditions of this character. And I love them all. He is a wonderful representation of the time period & class to which he belongs. As to a past event, I would go to a gold digging, no title girl along the lines of Vanity Fair who tricked someone close to him or maybe he himself. Who knows? But, it's certainly fun to think about.
Who are some of your favorite characters? Why? And, what one thing do you envision in their past that resonates in their present?
Happy Writing,
Patti
Monday, December 6, 2010
Na-Know
So, yeah, that Na-No thing. I didn't hit the finish line. My car on the autobahn morphed into the beater on the side of a country road with miles of winter clad fields that stretched as wide as my bleary eyed vision could wander. I attempted to get back on track; I really, truly did.
I wrote random scenes, out of context, but, hey, it was NaNo. I could do that. Then, when that didn't work, I went to the end & tried to write that. It seemed to make sense since I already knew how the story would end - yeah, no. I wrote a steam-steam scene completely out of context & totally inappropriate for the story. What the heck - it made me smile. Then, as a last resort, I started every sentence with the words, "This sucks...." Sadly,these words depressed even farther.
My head in foggy dissolution or delusion depending on the moment; my heart sank & fell out of like. Then the month ended - Thank God!!! Now, I have 17 decent chapters and a host of word jumble rubble. I've had a few days to ponder the entire mess.
So I am left to revamp the outline, finish the draft (it's very drafty), & then clean it chambermaid style. I did learn some stuff though.
1. Complete outline - necessary
2. Cohesion - gotta have it
3. Half-cocked - not condusive
4. Finish line - definite, just not in 30 days - not this time
Ah well, if you're going to fail at something, might as well have a full house. Humility is just not the same without an audience. It's okay though; I survived, I am revived & the bruises will heal. Especially that ego one; it smarts even now. Must get the neosporting.
Happy Writing,
Patti
I wrote random scenes, out of context, but, hey, it was NaNo. I could do that. Then, when that didn't work, I went to the end & tried to write that. It seemed to make sense since I already knew how the story would end - yeah, no. I wrote a steam-steam scene completely out of context & totally inappropriate for the story. What the heck - it made me smile. Then, as a last resort, I started every sentence with the words, "This sucks...." Sadly,these words depressed even farther.
My head in foggy dissolution or delusion depending on the moment; my heart sank & fell out of like. Then the month ended - Thank God!!! Now, I have 17 decent chapters and a host of word jumble rubble. I've had a few days to ponder the entire mess.
So I am left to revamp the outline, finish the draft (it's very drafty), & then clean it chambermaid style. I did learn some stuff though.
1. Complete outline - necessary
2. Cohesion - gotta have it
3. Half-cocked - not condusive
4. Finish line - definite, just not in 30 days - not this time
Ah well, if you're going to fail at something, might as well have a full house. Humility is just not the same without an audience. It's okay though; I survived, I am revived & the bruises will heal. Especially that ego one; it smarts even now. Must get the neosporting.
Happy Writing,
Patti
Friday, December 3, 2010
Friday Mash Up - Post Triptophan & Other Bits
Congratulations - To all the NaNo winners!!!! To Jennifer for cresting her 500th sale!!
In Other Blogs -Erica is having a post-NaNo blogfestive. Brenda posted on CA Marshall's edit giveaway; check it out, enter & hopefully win the prize. Shellie discussed rule breaking. Christine Bell revealed TMI - confessions & other stuffs. Nicole talked about the moment you realize your work doesn't suck. Gardner took us back to the days of Glam Rock - the hair, the debauch & the operatic. Kay talked about resurrecting villain syndrome & how it can work effectively.
Iggi & Gabi spent the week discussing blogging - myths, boosting & why. The Bear Monk covered a week in revival - Sarah, TSA, North Korea - readers beware. Katie showed us snow days in Glasgow - great pics & ice slicks. Glad to hear Laura is recovering from the flu bug. Lisa listed her top 5 movies for the Christmas viewing season. Clarissa posted pics form her trip - Hearst Castle yumminess. Jennifer needs some help with boy book buying & she's knee-deep in cookie dough frenzy.
MT is giving away a Write Planner in time for Christmas - enter & win. Donna provided a link to writer Natalie Whipple's story - check 'em both. Nancy covered the sting & the inspiration in her writing life. Madeleine is hosting a blogfesty - 500 words, 1 character's room, a multitude of guesses. Simon posted an interesting read on writing for video games - more info to follow.
Terri talked about her MC, neuroses & hearting characters. Leigh covered POV & killing an MC - a rhyme, a time & doing it write. Kathryn @ The Blood-Red Pencil has suffered a loss - her inner editor has been kidnapped; not to worry, Kelly Simmons gave it back. Angela covered borders & barriers in the thesaurus. Candyland had a great post on the achievement of dreams. Lydia discussed the Page 69 Pop Quiz - sheck it out. The Writing Bug posted its 2011 writing contests much ado for all. Jody talked about blogging v. politicking - no popularity contests needed.
Hostings - Roni Loren hosted Tiffany Reisz & the topic of erotica. Jennifer Lane had a chat with Lisa Sanchez, author of 'Eve of Samhain'. Joanna interrogated editor/author Clarissa Yip - lots of great q&a's. Nicki met Susan Kaye Quinn at her book signing - promotion & the writer. Pat had Molly MacRae who discussed her publishing journey. Al was hosted by Kathleen Jones - one of his favorite bloggies. Francine covered lit agent Kirsty McLachlan's Writers' News article on getting an agent. The Old Silly hosted Vivian Zabel author of 'Stolen'. Theresa Walsh talked to Jane Friedman on all things publishy.
Reviews -Jayne reviewed 'The Hating Game' by Talli Roland; a great premise promises much hilarity - help this writer hit the Amazon listola. Karen covered 'Perilous' by Tamara Hart Heiner - check out the Kindle giveaway. Milo reviewed 'The Prefect' by Alastair Reynolds - the joy of finding a new author. Jenn discussed 'Book of a Thousand Day' by Shannon Hale - a Grimm retelling that sounds fantasmic.
Agents, Agents Everywhere - Scott Eagan covered technique,Steam Punk, knowing your role, itchy-nichey & the extensive NaNo process. Jessica Faust is hosting the 12 Day of Christmas for the beginning of the month - 3 days down, more to go. Janet Reid posted a rejection rebuttal & I'ma guessin' the guy won't be considered in the future either. Kristin Nelson posted query trends in their office recently - know the list, catch the bus. Rachelle Gardner posted her list of blog turn offs - no beach walking or anything of the sort.
And there it be. An entire week in which I have been terribly behind, had to read them all in one sit & rendered them to the sphere. On the non-medicated front, I am feeling better again - convincing my body to 4-go a 3-peat is definite agenda material. Next week, I will cover NaNo, No-No & ....
Happy Writing,
Patti
In Other Blogs -Erica is having a post-NaNo blogfestive. Brenda posted on CA Marshall's edit giveaway; check it out, enter & hopefully win the prize. Shellie discussed rule breaking. Christine Bell revealed TMI - confessions & other stuffs. Nicole talked about the moment you realize your work doesn't suck. Gardner took us back to the days of Glam Rock - the hair, the debauch & the operatic. Kay talked about resurrecting villain syndrome & how it can work effectively.
Iggi & Gabi spent the week discussing blogging - myths, boosting & why. The Bear Monk covered a week in revival - Sarah, TSA, North Korea - readers beware. Katie showed us snow days in Glasgow - great pics & ice slicks. Glad to hear Laura is recovering from the flu bug. Lisa listed her top 5 movies for the Christmas viewing season. Clarissa posted pics form her trip - Hearst Castle yumminess. Jennifer needs some help with boy book buying & she's knee-deep in cookie dough frenzy.
MT is giving away a Write Planner in time for Christmas - enter & win. Donna provided a link to writer Natalie Whipple's story - check 'em both. Nancy covered the sting & the inspiration in her writing life. Madeleine is hosting a blogfesty - 500 words, 1 character's room, a multitude of guesses. Simon posted an interesting read on writing for video games - more info to follow.
Terri talked about her MC, neuroses & hearting characters. Leigh covered POV & killing an MC - a rhyme, a time & doing it write. Kathryn @ The Blood-Red Pencil has suffered a loss - her inner editor has been kidnapped; not to worry, Kelly Simmons gave it back. Angela covered borders & barriers in the thesaurus. Candyland had a great post on the achievement of dreams. Lydia discussed the Page 69 Pop Quiz - sheck it out. The Writing Bug posted its 2011 writing contests much ado for all. Jody talked about blogging v. politicking - no popularity contests needed.
Hostings - Roni Loren hosted Tiffany Reisz & the topic of erotica. Jennifer Lane had a chat with Lisa Sanchez, author of 'Eve of Samhain'. Joanna interrogated editor/author Clarissa Yip - lots of great q&a's. Nicki met Susan Kaye Quinn at her book signing - promotion & the writer. Pat had Molly MacRae who discussed her publishing journey. Al was hosted by Kathleen Jones - one of his favorite bloggies. Francine covered lit agent Kirsty McLachlan's Writers' News article on getting an agent. The Old Silly hosted Vivian Zabel author of 'Stolen'. Theresa Walsh talked to Jane Friedman on all things publishy.
Reviews -Jayne reviewed 'The Hating Game' by Talli Roland; a great premise promises much hilarity - help this writer hit the Amazon listola. Karen covered 'Perilous' by Tamara Hart Heiner - check out the Kindle giveaway. Milo reviewed 'The Prefect' by Alastair Reynolds - the joy of finding a new author. Jenn discussed 'Book of a Thousand Day' by Shannon Hale - a Grimm retelling that sounds fantasmic.
Agents, Agents Everywhere - Scott Eagan covered technique,Steam Punk, knowing your role, itchy-nichey & the extensive NaNo process. Jessica Faust is hosting the 12 Day of Christmas for the beginning of the month - 3 days down, more to go. Janet Reid posted a rejection rebuttal & I'ma guessin' the guy won't be considered in the future either. Kristin Nelson posted query trends in their office recently - know the list, catch the bus. Rachelle Gardner posted her list of blog turn offs - no beach walking or anything of the sort.
And there it be. An entire week in which I have been terribly behind, had to read them all in one sit & rendered them to the sphere. On the non-medicated front, I am feeling better again - convincing my body to 4-go a 3-peat is definite agenda material. Next week, I will cover NaNo, No-No & ....
Happy Writing,
Patti
Tuesday, November 23, 2010
Bow Ties
There are 3 steps to bring a story to its conclusion. First, the plot & all subplots meet & most are resolved. Second, the ending hits the emotional bread basket & leaves readers satisfied. And last, the character arc is realized - positive, negative or no change. Plotting the end is almost as difficult, if not more so, than the beginning. Let's look at some of the methods that might help the process.
Dead End - Make a determination where the story ends. There is nothing that comes after; no epilogue, no further explanation. A predetermined end point allows the story to unfold from the set-up.
Ready, Set, Go - Timing is everything. Picking the perfect time to end the story leaves the reader feeling satisfied. Sometimes pulling out almost at the end can be even better. In the HEA ending, it is implied; riding into the sunset, getting to the altar, kissing.
Conflictus Resolvus - Determine the main conflict, all of its possible endings then decide which is best for the story. The convergence point allows all of the conflicts to be tidied not necessarily resolved.
The Beat Goes On - When the story is complete, the reader walks away feeling that the main characters are still living out there somewhere. On some plane, all of our favorite characters are partying in the ether.
Happy Writing,
Patti
Dead End - Make a determination where the story ends. There is nothing that comes after; no epilogue, no further explanation. A predetermined end point allows the story to unfold from the set-up.
Ready, Set, Go - Timing is everything. Picking the perfect time to end the story leaves the reader feeling satisfied. Sometimes pulling out almost at the end can be even better. In the HEA ending, it is implied; riding into the sunset, getting to the altar, kissing.
Conflictus Resolvus - Determine the main conflict, all of its possible endings then decide which is best for the story. The convergence point allows all of the conflicts to be tidied not necessarily resolved.
The Beat Goes On - When the story is complete, the reader walks away feeling that the main characters are still living out there somewhere. On some plane, all of our favorite characters are partying in the ether.
Happy Writing,
Patti
Monday, November 8, 2010
Vitamin 'C'
Conflict is the mechanism by which writers plunge the MC into the deep end of the pool and then continue to dunk him/her when they come up for air. Until finally, they are given the choice to sink or swim - life vest optional.
Definition (Encarta Online Dictionary):
1. military war: warfare between opposing forces, especially a prolonged and bitter but sporadic struggle
news that the conflict had reached the outskirts of the capital
2. difference: a disagreement or clash between ideas, principles, or people
3. psychology mental struggle: a psychological state resulting from the often unconscious opposition between simultaneous but incompatible desires, needs, drives, or impulses
4. literature plot tension: opposition between or among characters or forces in a literary work that shapes or motivates the action of the plot
news that the conflict had reached the outskirts of the capital
2. difference: a disagreement or clash between ideas, principles, or people
3. psychology mental struggle: a psychological state resulting from the often unconscious opposition between simultaneous but incompatible desires, needs, drives, or impulses
4. literature plot tension: opposition between or among characters or forces in a literary work that shapes or motivates the action of the plot
Novel Conflict
Internal – self; a growth arc regardless of resolution – overcoming internal hurt – Freedom by Jonathan Franzen
Relationship – others; antagonist; forces internal change in MC – The Five People You Meet in Heaven by Mitch Albom
Social – group; ideas, practices, customs – The DaVinci Code by Dan Brown
Survival – fatalism; weather, starvation, animals – Into the Wild by John Krakauer
Situation – MCs problems revolve around interests, ambitions, situations of others in direct relation to MC; place/plot; used to grow conflict – Pride & Prejudice by Jane Austen
Natural World – think plagues of Egypt – Plague War by Jeff Carlson
God – good & evil; Angels & Demons by Dan Brown
Resources:
Elizabeth Richards – Feb 20, 2008 http://www.suite101.com/content/how-to-write-conflict-a45359
Jennifer Henderson – Feb 16, 2010 http://www.suite101.com/content/writing-a-fictional-story-a202635
Leslie Wainger – October 2010 http://www.dummies.com/how-to/content/creating-emotional-conflict-and-tension-in-a-roman.html
Happy Writing,
Patti
Thursday, November 4, 2010
Thinkin' Thursday - Winds of Change
In post election haze & to combat my NaNo breath, I decided to look at some of the historical events that took place this week across the United States. Three things that changed us in some fundamental way. Each snippet is a story in its own right.
In 1914, the bra became a patented product in the United States. And, contrary to convention, the patent actually came from a woman - Mary Phelps Jaccob. And all because of a dress! Bowing to the power that is fashion.
In 1916, the first woman was elected to Congress from Montana - Jeanette Rankin. Montana women had the right to vote even before statehood was finalized. There's something to be said for lack of sprawl, I guess.
In 1969, Sesame Street debuted on PBS. Yes, Sesame Street & I were born in the same year. I grew up on Oscar, Bert & Ernie, & Mr. Snuffalupagus. No Tickle Me Elmo or as my kids refer to him - Emo Elmo. Of course, no one had to worry about Big Bird Facebooking about Bert & Ernie's living arrangements back then either.
What historical event/s come to mind? Have you ever considered writing about them/incorporating them into the fabric of your story?
Happy Writing,
Patti
Wednesday, November 3, 2010
Wri, Wry or Rye - Depends
Day 3 - Crossed into 6040 yesterday. And I learned some stuff. First, having a plan makes writing easier. Second, I'm not editing, but I'm definitely spell-correcting - habit. Third, one hour = 1000 words, roughly.
We shall see what today brings.
Yesterday, I came across a link over at Joanna St. James' blog - eHarlequin. They are giving away NaNo prizes in different categories each week. One of the things they asked each person to post was favorite line written thus far. Here's mine:
We shall see what today brings.
Yesterday, I came across a link over at Joanna St. James' blog - eHarlequin. They are giving away NaNo prizes in different categories each week. One of the things they asked each person to post was favorite line written thus far. Here's mine:
"You are one pixel shy of an ADD commercial."
I think that definitely speaks to the wry part of this post. That leaves the rye. I love rye bread; especially with braunshwei - oh, forget it. Liver sausage, that's easier. And corned beef, roast beef, or pastrami. And let's not forget the mustard or the pickles. I love pickles! Ouch, I'm thinking about lunch already. This does not bode well. Maybe I can talk hubs into fixing me something. Hey, I'm working here!
And another toast: When your MC starts to flee, here's hoping you have plenty of vitamin C.
Goofy, I know, but what can I say. I think it's a goofy kind of day.
Happy Writing,
Patti
Tuesday, November 2, 2010
It's a No-No
Day 1 - Survived. Still breathing. No tears. Yay!!
Day 2 - Ready to move into next phase & set up.
It's not a no-no; it's a novel. So far, so good. Only 87000 words to go. I am using Storybook for organization which has been very helpful. And the family is happy about the lack of paper piling around my writing space. I am still using Word for the writing - I think this is more a matter of habit than anything else. My comfort zone is only breached in certain areas & my choice of word processing program is not on the chopping block.
Couldn't get into the NaNo site yesterday. Can't figure out how to move my word counter. Laid out tentative ending. I had the basic idea based on the framework, still hadn't made a final determination. But, I believe I have finally gotten there. It's like picking a prom outfit, you know. The dress, the shoes, the hair, the jewelry & the flowers all mesh to create a storybook ending. So too, the ending of a novel. If the shoes don't match, the picture is incomplete - dye the shoes, trust me.
A toast: May your writing be inspired; may you never be too tired. May your characters run a straight line; may they stay away from the wine. Happy creating & no debating.
Happy Writing,
Patti
Monday, October 25, 2010
1st Rule of NaNo - Let's Talk About NaNo
Here we are, a week away from NaNo. I have procured a brand new box of Kleenex for the times I can't help but cry. I have dug up my head phones in order to control my compulsion to answer the phone when it rings. I have even talked to the members of my immediate & extended family about how not to interrupt. They didn't take it well, but we're working through it.
I thought it might be pertinent to get my ducks in linear formation. So, here's where I've been & hopefully where I'ma going.
Brainshtorm - I have an idea. And for some unbeknownst reason, it is outside of the normal corral. I can't decide if this is a good or bad thing, so I am just going to go for it.
Words Count - 1667 will get ya 50k. But, I have decided to shoot for 3k per day. We'll see how this works out. Hence the reason for the Kleenex!
Wesearch - Stacks of paper, photo representations, vague outline in my cranium. This afternoon, I will pull together location photos. I am not an avid traveler; truth be told, if I never have to fly again - I am totally cool with that. But, I have to figure out the deets of some shwanky spots - should be interesting.
What are you doing to prepare for NaNo?
Happy Writing,
Patti
I thought it might be pertinent to get my ducks in linear formation. So, here's where I've been & hopefully where I'ma going.
Brainshtorm - I have an idea. And for some unbeknownst reason, it is outside of the normal corral. I can't decide if this is a good or bad thing, so I am just going to go for it.
Words Count - 1667 will get ya 50k. But, I have decided to shoot for 3k per day. We'll see how this works out. Hence the reason for the Kleenex!
Wesearch - Stacks of paper, photo representations, vague outline in my cranium. This afternoon, I will pull together location photos. I am not an avid traveler; truth be told, if I never have to fly again - I am totally cool with that. But, I have to figure out the deets of some shwanky spots - should be interesting.
What are you doing to prepare for NaNo?
Happy Writing,
Patti
Friday, September 24, 2010
Friday Mash-Up & A Bit More
This week dealt with contests - the why, where & when. I will be putting together lists in the coming months of different contests. If anyone knows of any that are not listed, please post them in the comments & we'll get them out there.
Announcements - I would like to welcome Alexandra Crocodile & Erin MacPherson to our little Bump House.
Check them out.
No awards this week, but we'll keep plugging. So, on to the rest.
First, a bit that has defined this last week...
Second, an anecdotal compilation of this week's posts.
This morning, my 17yo daughter invaded my bathroom. Mostly because the mirror's bigger, but also to complain about her love handles. The sad part of this is that she weighs all of 120lbs. & is a stick. I digress, I proceeded to share the tank trick with her. You know the one, a size larger tank underneath a tee & you flatten out the rolls.
"But, my only tight tank top is dirty," she said.
"Here, you can wear one of mine." I went to my closet, found the perfect compliment & then tightened the straps. Perfectly reasonable.
She put it on, put the t-shirt over it & then looked into the mirror. Now, did my little princess say, "Hey, thanks mom." No, no she didn't.
She slushed that shirt over her abdomen & said, "Oh my God, this is so sad. I must be getting fat if I can wear one of your shirts."
"Um, what???" I said dropping the blow dryer to the counter.
"Well, I've never been able to wear one of your shirts before. It's," she looked at my reflection in the mirror. "It's just weird."
Refusing to take this bit any further, I calmly traced to the kitchen & poured myself more coffee. Ha!
However, there is an allegory here. I have been putting my contest submission piece out there for feedback. And, there have been mixed reviews. But, that doesn't stop me from continuing to trim the *fat* & rolling out the love handles. I am determined to employ the tank trick - layering with the important bits. And, I will be heading back to the exercise dvd's - stat.
How does the mix of feedback you receive play a role in your writing life & your pursuit of writing contests?
Happy Writing,
Patti
Announcements - I would like to welcome Alexandra Crocodile & Erin MacPherson to our little Bump House.
Check them out.
No awards this week, but we'll keep plugging. So, on to the rest.
First, a bit that has defined this last week...
Here I sit, heating pad at my back,
Laptop at the front
And, poor hubby has taken the brunt.
Second, an anecdotal compilation of this week's posts.
This morning, my 17yo daughter invaded my bathroom. Mostly because the mirror's bigger, but also to complain about her love handles. The sad part of this is that she weighs all of 120lbs. & is a stick. I digress, I proceeded to share the tank trick with her. You know the one, a size larger tank underneath a tee & you flatten out the rolls.
"But, my only tight tank top is dirty," she said.
"Here, you can wear one of mine." I went to my closet, found the perfect compliment & then tightened the straps. Perfectly reasonable.
She put it on, put the t-shirt over it & then looked into the mirror. Now, did my little princess say, "Hey, thanks mom." No, no she didn't.
She slushed that shirt over her abdomen & said, "Oh my God, this is so sad. I must be getting fat if I can wear one of your shirts."
"Um, what???" I said dropping the blow dryer to the counter.
"Well, I've never been able to wear one of your shirts before. It's," she looked at my reflection in the mirror. "It's just weird."
Refusing to take this bit any further, I calmly traced to the kitchen & poured myself more coffee. Ha!
However, there is an allegory here. I have been putting my contest submission piece out there for feedback. And, there have been mixed reviews. But, that doesn't stop me from continuing to trim the *fat* & rolling out the love handles. I am determined to employ the tank trick - layering with the important bits. And, I will be heading back to the exercise dvd's - stat.
How does the mix of feedback you receive play a role in your writing life & your pursuit of writing contests?
Happy Writing,
Patti
Thursday, September 23, 2010
Thinkin' Thursday - Golden Spoon Award
Weird, wacky words deserve their own special place in the stratosphere. In honor of the peculiarities of the English language, I am giving away the Golden Spoon Award.
The Challenge - Below is a list of 20 Weird words; each with an accompanying sentence that will indicate the definition of the word. So, all you have to do is figure out the definition. Easy enough. The first 5 people to hit the finish line will be passed the Golden Spoon on tomorrow's post.
Without further adieu, away we go....
Erinaceous - Sonic is considered an erinaceous creature.
Lamprophony - The lamprophony of his speech left no doubt as to his intentions.
Depone - With her hand on the Bible, the woman agreed to depone.
Finnimbrun - The finnimbrun hung secretly beneath her bodice.
Floccinaucinihilipilification - His floccinaucinihilipilifacation of the antique dampened her dreams of sale.
Inaniloquent - "Inane does not begin to describe the coffee klatch. Inaniloquent is more to the point," she said.
Limerance - His dissertation covered a limerance of courtly affairs during the Middle Ages.
Mesonoxian - His mesonoxian activities led her to believe the vampiric rumors.
Mungo - Her mungo activities provided her shopping cart with many oddities.
Nihilarian - His job consisted of a series of nihilarian activities to nowhere.
Nudiustertian - She ate the same lunch, sat at the same table as nudiustertian.
Phenakism - Specializing in phenakism kept him alive during the war.
Pronk - He is a total pronk. He couldn't lift his own weight out of bed, let alone do a chin up.
Pulveratricious - The license plate was obscured due to its pulveratricious condition.
Rastaquouere - When one attempts rastaquouere maneuvers, one must be careful in vine selection.
Scopperloit - The children engaged in scopperloit activity that resulted in another visit to the hospital.
Selcouth - The door bell rang and in marched the selcouth relatives with a gaggle of gifts from their travels.
Tyrotoxism - Tyrotoxism is the leading cause of death in unsuspecting mice.
Widdiful - The cowboy's widdiful ways with cattle led him to the gallows.
Zabernism - In an attempted coup, the general's zabernism led to his downfall.
Have fun & Happy Writing!
Patti
| Golden Spoon of Words Award |
The Challenge - Below is a list of 20 Weird words; each with an accompanying sentence that will indicate the definition of the word. So, all you have to do is figure out the definition. Easy enough. The first 5 people to hit the finish line will be passed the Golden Spoon on tomorrow's post.
Without further adieu, away we go....
Erinaceous - Sonic is considered an erinaceous creature.
Lamprophony - The lamprophony of his speech left no doubt as to his intentions.
Depone - With her hand on the Bible, the woman agreed to depone.
Finnimbrun - The finnimbrun hung secretly beneath her bodice.
Floccinaucinihilipilification - His floccinaucinihilipilifacation of the antique dampened her dreams of sale.
Inaniloquent - "Inane does not begin to describe the coffee klatch. Inaniloquent is more to the point," she said.
Limerance - His dissertation covered a limerance of courtly affairs during the Middle Ages.
Mesonoxian - His mesonoxian activities led her to believe the vampiric rumors.
Mungo - Her mungo activities provided her shopping cart with many oddities.
Nihilarian - His job consisted of a series of nihilarian activities to nowhere.
Nudiustertian - She ate the same lunch, sat at the same table as nudiustertian.
Phenakism - Specializing in phenakism kept him alive during the war.
Pronk - He is a total pronk. He couldn't lift his own weight out of bed, let alone do a chin up.
Pulveratricious - The license plate was obscured due to its pulveratricious condition.
Rastaquouere - When one attempts rastaquouere maneuvers, one must be careful in vine selection.
Scopperloit - The children engaged in scopperloit activity that resulted in another visit to the hospital.
Selcouth - The door bell rang and in marched the selcouth relatives with a gaggle of gifts from their travels.
Tyrotoxism - Tyrotoxism is the leading cause of death in unsuspecting mice.
Widdiful - The cowboy's widdiful ways with cattle led him to the gallows.
Zabernism - In an attempted coup, the general's zabernism led to his downfall.
Have fun & Happy Writing!
Patti
Wednesday, September 22, 2010
Fall Contest Fashion
I have compiled a short list of contests. These contests end in September and October. The list addresses some of the questions/concerns brought up by you guys. I will work over the next few months to put together more timely lists on this topic. For now, here's a start.
Happy Writing,
Patti
Non-Fiction Writing Contests
Georgetown Review 10/1
The Missouri Review 10/1
New Orleans Review 10/1
New Southerner 10/1
Thin Air Magazine 10/30
Fiction Writing Contests
Carpe Articulum 9/30
Georgetown Review 10/1
Glimmer Train 9/30 & 10/31
New Orleans Review 10/1
Rough Copy 10/1
Ruminate 10/15
Thin Air Magazine 10/30
Free Writing Contests
Author Stand 10/31
Writer’s DigestHappy Writing,
Patti
Tuesday, September 21, 2010
Training Days
When I began considering what I wanted to accomplish this week, I had no idea that I would be writing this particular post, but here she be.
My son is playing JV soccer this year. He is not the best ball handler, the fastest runner or the most aggressive. But, he is the best listener, hardest worker and most hungry.
Listen Carefully - Feedback is the currency by which we all live. My son's coach stopped us after the last game. He asked if our son had played before; mostly because he was pretty rough during those first few weeks of practice. He then told us, "If the rest of these guys listened as well as him, the team would be sooooo much better." As a parent, this gave me warm tingles. Holy cow! He listens, really? Uh, yeah, to other people.
When the coach gives instruction, when the goalie redirects him and when the rest of the team congratulate him - he listens with ears, brain and heart. He takes everything, rolls it into his personal program & piles it all together. He gets better every practice & every game because he doesn't filter it through his ego. As writers, pushing ourselves into the big, bad world, we have to chuck our ego at the portal. Think of it as our personal offering to the writing gurus. If we don't, we will fall flat with the first bit of criticism that comes our way & we will miss the gems of wise advice falling from the sky.
Hard Work is a REQUIREMENT - My son gets up every morning before school & goes on a run with us. He isn't always pleasant. Heck, I'm not always pleasant either! But, we do it. It started because he needed the endurance training piece. It has continued because we all see the benefits. Besides, I find it wakes my brain better than coffee. So sad.
After one game, a couple of the guys told our boy, "If you worked this hard in practice, you would be soooo much better." He agreed. Don't get me wrong, there was a litany of excuses. "Yeah, I know, but.... (insert excuse here)." However, this little realization has pushed him to work twice as hard as everyone else. His ball handling, speed & aggressiveness have all seen marked increases.
I know that I too need to increase in all of these areas. Craft handling, churning words & pursuing writing with the zeal of a panda at the bamboo preserve. These are my personal challenges.
Seven Courses, Please - Hunger. My son doesn't want to be the albatross of his team. He sat here a few nights ago telling us that his goal was to beat so & so. In all of my motherly wisdom, I said, "You are your own best & worst competition. The only person you need to beat is you." Isn't it great when we realize how valuable our advice is - to ourselves! (Refer to point number one here.)
So, he sat down last night & reviewed our tapes of every game. He pinpointed where he could improve, what worked for other players & how he could incorporate it. He learned from reviewing his own work on the field. Another course of study for his game play.
I have read darn near every book I can get my hands on when it comes to craft. I read copious amounts of work - both on & off the bestseller list; classic & contemporary. I have joined a critique group. I have a marvelous critique partner who pushes me outside of my box. I blog religiously - to learn & be learned. I read all of your blogs.
What does all of this have to do with writing contests? Do I want to be a one-hit wonder - yeah, no. Do I want to be prolific - you bet your sweet potato! How do I accomplish this - listen, work, eat.
Contests provide pinpointed feedback. Contests push us to stretch our writing marks. Contests are good with mustard - not really. Well, I could always use more fiber in my diet, so maybe. However, supplementing the writing diet with contests provides a different spice & hopefully some perspective & forward momentum.
So, my question to each of you: How do you apply the listen, work, eat trichotomy to your writing & contest life?
Happy Writing,
Patti
My son is playing JV soccer this year. He is not the best ball handler, the fastest runner or the most aggressive. But, he is the best listener, hardest worker and most hungry.
Listen Carefully - Feedback is the currency by which we all live. My son's coach stopped us after the last game. He asked if our son had played before; mostly because he was pretty rough during those first few weeks of practice. He then told us, "If the rest of these guys listened as well as him, the team would be sooooo much better." As a parent, this gave me warm tingles. Holy cow! He listens, really? Uh, yeah, to other people.
When the coach gives instruction, when the goalie redirects him and when the rest of the team congratulate him - he listens with ears, brain and heart. He takes everything, rolls it into his personal program & piles it all together. He gets better every practice & every game because he doesn't filter it through his ego. As writers, pushing ourselves into the big, bad world, we have to chuck our ego at the portal. Think of it as our personal offering to the writing gurus. If we don't, we will fall flat with the first bit of criticism that comes our way & we will miss the gems of wise advice falling from the sky.
Hard Work is a REQUIREMENT - My son gets up every morning before school & goes on a run with us. He isn't always pleasant. Heck, I'm not always pleasant either! But, we do it. It started because he needed the endurance training piece. It has continued because we all see the benefits. Besides, I find it wakes my brain better than coffee. So sad.
After one game, a couple of the guys told our boy, "If you worked this hard in practice, you would be soooo much better." He agreed. Don't get me wrong, there was a litany of excuses. "Yeah, I know, but.... (insert excuse here)." However, this little realization has pushed him to work twice as hard as everyone else. His ball handling, speed & aggressiveness have all seen marked increases.
I know that I too need to increase in all of these areas. Craft handling, churning words & pursuing writing with the zeal of a panda at the bamboo preserve. These are my personal challenges.
Seven Courses, Please - Hunger. My son doesn't want to be the albatross of his team. He sat here a few nights ago telling us that his goal was to beat so & so. In all of my motherly wisdom, I said, "You are your own best & worst competition. The only person you need to beat is you." Isn't it great when we realize how valuable our advice is - to ourselves! (Refer to point number one here.)
So, he sat down last night & reviewed our tapes of every game. He pinpointed where he could improve, what worked for other players & how he could incorporate it. He learned from reviewing his own work on the field. Another course of study for his game play.
I have read darn near every book I can get my hands on when it comes to craft. I read copious amounts of work - both on & off the bestseller list; classic & contemporary. I have joined a critique group. I have a marvelous critique partner who pushes me outside of my box. I blog religiously - to learn & be learned. I read all of your blogs.
What does all of this have to do with writing contests? Do I want to be a one-hit wonder - yeah, no. Do I want to be prolific - you bet your sweet potato! How do I accomplish this - listen, work, eat.
Contests provide pinpointed feedback. Contests push us to stretch our writing marks. Contests are good with mustard - not really. Well, I could always use more fiber in my diet, so maybe. However, supplementing the writing diet with contests provides a different spice & hopefully some perspective & forward momentum.
So, my question to each of you: How do you apply the listen, work, eat trichotomy to your writing & contest life?
Happy Writing,
Patti
Thursday, September 16, 2010
Thinkin' Thursday - Chain of Words
We live in a world of words. Sometimes they escape us; sometimes they invigorate us. Whichever way it goes, this Thursday's challenge is to create a chain of interconnected words. I will start & we shall see where it goes.
A - atrocious
B - beastly
C - catastrophic
D - dastardly
E - egregious
F - foul
G - ghastly
H - horrid
I - ignoble
J - jerky
K - killjoy
L - lamentable
M - maniacal
N - nasty
O - obscene
P - profane
Q - quarrelsome
R - repellent
S - shady
T - treacherous
U - undesirable
V - villainous
W - wicked
X - xenophobic
Y - yeti
Z - zombie
Yes, I know some of them are quite the stretch, but I think you get the point. Grab three sequential letters, tie them together thematically & see what happens. Leave your list-o-las below.
Happy Writing,
Patti
A - atrocious
B - beastly
C - catastrophic
D - dastardly
E - egregious
F - foul
G - ghastly
H - horrid
I - ignoble
J - jerky
K - killjoy
L - lamentable
M - maniacal
N - nasty
O - obscene
P - profane
Q - quarrelsome
R - repellent
S - shady
T - treacherous
U - undesirable
V - villainous
W - wicked
X - xenophobic
Y - yeti
Z - zombie
Yes, I know some of them are quite the stretch, but I think you get the point. Grab three sequential letters, tie them together thematically & see what happens. Leave your list-o-las below.
Happy Writing,
Patti
Wednesday, September 15, 2010
For Why Dost Thou Blog?
A blog is a medium for reaching those outside of our own microcosm. Communities are formed around an area of interest & we are all an integral part of that evolution. We all read & hear about blogging as a chink in the platform armor. And that plays a vital role in our reasons for tripping the keyboard blogosphere. But, there are other reasons that we engage in the rote of this medium.
Building Blocks - Research, write, report. Rinse & repeat. There are so many topics to cover under the heading: Writer, that each of us brings a unique perspective, a new piece of information, even new methodologies. We build conglomerations of information dispensed in our own individual voices. We are creating a wealth of knowledge that translates into the cyber realm. And that is how we, as individuals, build a credible body of online work.
Shtyle - Everyone has their own style. It permeates every facet of our lives. The blog allows us to experiment with different elements of our writing which culminates in an overall style with which we are comfortable. Holy cow, that was a long sentence. Not my standard cup of black & swirly. But, I do get a chance to play with the different elements.
Under Construction - Maintaining an online blogging presence provides a road map to readers, writers, editors, agents, magazines, etc. If you blog it, they will come. Whether it's your WIP, a book promotion, or just getting your name out there, blogging provides a stage that brings people together. Blogging provides the map, you determine the scenic detours.
Now, jog in place - Practice. Blogging keeps me on track. I write everyday because I blog M-F. Spurring the writing process is one of the greatest blogging benefits. I find myself wondering about my next blog even before I am finished with the current one. And, because this is an interactive environment, the feedback we receive lets us know what works, what doesn't & sometimes what we need to work on most.
Connect the dots - The writing blogworld is our version of the juicy tidbits bar. Did you hear about this book? This author just got picked up by who? Contests, what contests? New agent, you don't say? Are you attending that conference? What did you think about...? We connect to one another in this realm & it is where a vast majority of our own information comes from. Our work is performed in the most sokitary of manners; therefore, it is vital that we reach out & virtual hug someone. Reading other blogs, commenting on them, or just laughing alsongside - these are the digital warm fuzzies that we need to remind ourselves we are not alone. No writer is an archipelago.
These represent a small fraction of the reasons we blog. Each of us has a myriad of reasons for engaging this corner of cyberdom. Some days I find it cathartic; others I work on the educational aspect. And, sometimes I do it to allow my crazy gnome out of the garden. However, the most important aspect for me is the fact that I am constantly learning, growing & most importantly writing.
What are some of the greatest benefits you see form blogging? What, if any, do find to be detractors?
Happy Writing,
Patti
Building Blocks - Research, write, report. Rinse & repeat. There are so many topics to cover under the heading: Writer, that each of us brings a unique perspective, a new piece of information, even new methodologies. We build conglomerations of information dispensed in our own individual voices. We are creating a wealth of knowledge that translates into the cyber realm. And that is how we, as individuals, build a credible body of online work.
Shtyle - Everyone has their own style. It permeates every facet of our lives. The blog allows us to experiment with different elements of our writing which culminates in an overall style with which we are comfortable. Holy cow, that was a long sentence. Not my standard cup of black & swirly. But, I do get a chance to play with the different elements.
Under Construction - Maintaining an online blogging presence provides a road map to readers, writers, editors, agents, magazines, etc. If you blog it, they will come. Whether it's your WIP, a book promotion, or just getting your name out there, blogging provides a stage that brings people together. Blogging provides the map, you determine the scenic detours.
Now, jog in place - Practice. Blogging keeps me on track. I write everyday because I blog M-F. Spurring the writing process is one of the greatest blogging benefits. I find myself wondering about my next blog even before I am finished with the current one. And, because this is an interactive environment, the feedback we receive lets us know what works, what doesn't & sometimes what we need to work on most.
Connect the dots - The writing blogworld is our version of the juicy tidbits bar. Did you hear about this book? This author just got picked up by who? Contests, what contests? New agent, you don't say? Are you attending that conference? What did you think about...? We connect to one another in this realm & it is where a vast majority of our own information comes from. Our work is performed in the most sokitary of manners; therefore, it is vital that we reach out & virtual hug someone. Reading other blogs, commenting on them, or just laughing alsongside - these are the digital warm fuzzies that we need to remind ourselves we are not alone. No writer is an archipelago.
These represent a small fraction of the reasons we blog. Each of us has a myriad of reasons for engaging this corner of cyberdom. Some days I find it cathartic; others I work on the educational aspect. And, sometimes I do it to allow my crazy gnome out of the garden. However, the most important aspect for me is the fact that I am constantly learning, growing & most importantly writing.
What are some of the greatest benefits you see form blogging? What, if any, do find to be detractors?
Happy Writing,
Patti
Monday, September 13, 2010
Flying within the Lines
This year has been one of change, overcoming obstacles & emotional clearing. In March, my 17 y.o. decided to go live with her dad. As hard as this was for me as a mother, I did it & I survived. Ten days of tears, five months of learning to let go. And today, she is flying home. Starting over, moving forward, dealing with issues - we pray.
Excitement & apprehension broil in a bag of emotional hope & doubt. My first full-length novel's MC is based on my daughter. Everything that she represented from an emotional standpoint - uncompromising, peevish, the teenage stuff.
As writers, it is our job to translate those real events to the paper. All of the emotion, growth, learning; the elements that turn us from one point in our evolution to the next.
I recently tucked that piece into its hidey-hop & began working on something new & different. I needed to for my own sense of self. But, it made me question the therapeutic nature of what we do. The interpretation & reflection of art & life poured onto the stage.
Emotion - Throughout any given day, we experience a range of emotion. From disgruntled to be awake to glad to hit the down comforter; we traverse a minefield of feeling. Each new piece of information rides a super-collider of action/reaction neurons that we contend with in microbursts. No two reactions are the same.
Viewpoint - Looking back on this last year, I have reflected on how I have changed, how my family has changed. The growth each of us has experienced or not. The story of the last six months as seen through 4 sets of eyes is varied in its emotional depth. It is different because we are different. And, it is different because the lessons each of us needs are different.
Motivations/Goals - Six months ago, my goal was to give my daughter something that I believed she needed in order to move forward, let go & forgive. I didn't like it. But, it wasn't about me & I had to let her go. Sometimes I wonder if that isn't the true test of parenting. I also wonder how she will view this short passage. Now, we obviously had very different ideas of how this whole thing would roll out. And, now I am curious how her mots/goals have changed. Has she grown? Is there perspective? What will the next 6 months bring?
Conflicts - And egads were there scads. I remember being a teenage girl. That time is not as far distant as my children would have one believe. Disgruntled, bristling, angry, flagless.
Now, here I am on the other side of those well-worn pickets & the head-butting has morphed into a perspective none has at 17. Those tense, tear-strained, kidney twisting moments feel like the Spanish armada has come to town. And, they are the moments upon which we build & shape our independence. The milliseconds of space-time that determine a direction, set us on a path & ultimately teach the lessons we need most.
So, in the grand scheme of this whole scene, I do have hope. We have seen positive momentum, actual thinking processes & we are excited. However, that doesn't mean we aren't waiting for that boulder to start rolling back down the mountain. The perpetual parenting pose - smile with a chance of falling rocks.
What does this have to do with my writing? Everything. The cathartic nature of the work allows each of us to rewrite, edit & monitor our actions/reactions. It also permits the artistic driver's license we need to make sense of our world.
Today, I am the scribe of a new chapter. For all the world's a stage & we but merely players. Somedays the role is the grand piano & others it's the prune. May all your characters find that for which they search & may you, the architect, discover that which forms, drives & elevates.
Happy Writing,
Patti
Excitement & apprehension broil in a bag of emotional hope & doubt. My first full-length novel's MC is based on my daughter. Everything that she represented from an emotional standpoint - uncompromising, peevish, the teenage stuff.
As writers, it is our job to translate those real events to the paper. All of the emotion, growth, learning; the elements that turn us from one point in our evolution to the next.
I recently tucked that piece into its hidey-hop & began working on something new & different. I needed to for my own sense of self. But, it made me question the therapeutic nature of what we do. The interpretation & reflection of art & life poured onto the stage.
Emotion - Throughout any given day, we experience a range of emotion. From disgruntled to be awake to glad to hit the down comforter; we traverse a minefield of feeling. Each new piece of information rides a super-collider of action/reaction neurons that we contend with in microbursts. No two reactions are the same.
Viewpoint - Looking back on this last year, I have reflected on how I have changed, how my family has changed. The growth each of us has experienced or not. The story of the last six months as seen through 4 sets of eyes is varied in its emotional depth. It is different because we are different. And, it is different because the lessons each of us needs are different.
Motivations/Goals - Six months ago, my goal was to give my daughter something that I believed she needed in order to move forward, let go & forgive. I didn't like it. But, it wasn't about me & I had to let her go. Sometimes I wonder if that isn't the true test of parenting. I also wonder how she will view this short passage. Now, we obviously had very different ideas of how this whole thing would roll out. And, now I am curious how her mots/goals have changed. Has she grown? Is there perspective? What will the next 6 months bring?
Conflicts - And egads were there scads. I remember being a teenage girl. That time is not as far distant as my children would have one believe. Disgruntled, bristling, angry, flagless.
Now, here I am on the other side of those well-worn pickets & the head-butting has morphed into a perspective none has at 17. Those tense, tear-strained, kidney twisting moments feel like the Spanish armada has come to town. And, they are the moments upon which we build & shape our independence. The milliseconds of space-time that determine a direction, set us on a path & ultimately teach the lessons we need most.
So, in the grand scheme of this whole scene, I do have hope. We have seen positive momentum, actual thinking processes & we are excited. However, that doesn't mean we aren't waiting for that boulder to start rolling back down the mountain. The perpetual parenting pose - smile with a chance of falling rocks.
What does this have to do with my writing? Everything. The cathartic nature of the work allows each of us to rewrite, edit & monitor our actions/reactions. It also permits the artistic driver's license we need to make sense of our world.
Today, I am the scribe of a new chapter. For all the world's a stage & we but merely players. Somedays the role is the grand piano & others it's the prune. May all your characters find that for which they search & may you, the architect, discover that which forms, drives & elevates.
Happy Writing,
Patti
Wednesday, September 8, 2010
I've Got Flair - 10 Methods of Style Development
In keeping with the countdown theme, although what I'm counting down to I'm unsure, I thought we would look at some writing improvement methods. Gary Provost's book 100 Ways to Improve Your Writing provides a host of things we can employ to work at the craft of writing.
Style, we hear a lot about it. We, ok me, worry about our style, our flair, our oomph on paper. Without further adieu, I give you the 10 Methods of Style Development.
Think about it - What is style? Style is the way we express our ideas on paper. Form. That form defines the method(s) by which a story is told. Expressive, stolid, humorous, dramatic - each of us possesses our own personal style.
Where is the harmony? - Writing is no different than composing. Words versus mucial notes. However, our words are the notes. Read what you write - out loud. If you trip over the words, if they fall flat against your tongue; then you need to revise. When I get to a passage & my eyes begin to squint, my tongue flops to the dead position & my brain stumbles, I look for the offenders. Unified flow varies & is at the mercy of the material, but it needs to be there.
What's that you say? - Conversation is vibrant, alive. It has emotion. It has variety. When you're angry, you don't look at the offender & say, "Pardon me sir, but I am afraid I have been offended by thee." Out come the gloves & the dueling pistols. That's fine if it's period specific. But, if it's 1986, you might say, "Dude, I'm bad." Ok, bad joke, but you get the point. Spoken language has its own tempo, do your best to imitate it.
Sentences - Short, medium, long. Long sentences get old after a while. But, so do short. Long sentences draw out the action; short ones ramp up the intensity. Medium ones sometimes provide the cool down time the reader needs. As with words, sentences need to be varied.
Constructing Sentences - Noun, verb. The basics. Noun, verb, object - a little more to the pie. However, as writers, our calling card is the ability to slide from the norm & invigorate our sentences. "It was a dark & stormy night in the town of Bethel." Um, yeah, boring. "Bethel, that place where nothing ever happens, stood sentinel as the wind howled, the clouds growled & danger glowed in ominous corners." Yes, I know I'm reaching; work with me! I think you get the point. Move beyond - breathe life into it.
Dick & Jane - "You must write in complete sentences," the English teacher said. No, actually, you mustn't. Sometimes. The. Structure. Is best. When - not. It's up to you. Now, I wouldn't recommend an entire book of one or two word sentences. That is a marathon pace that hurts my calves just thinking about it. But, the well-employed incomplete sentence can add vitality, tension & breadth to your work.
The 'Show Me' State - We all hear, "Show, dont' tell!" This is the backbone of our work. "The sky is blue, the grass is green & everything in my world is peachy-keen." Um, ok - if you tell me so. Setting, description, character; these all evoke emotion. And, we are working hard to connect the emotional dots. Demonstrate; do not report. Get out your local paper, read the police blotter/recent arrests.
'On Tuesday, June 2nd, one Mark Twain, was arrested for stealing a raft. He was apprehended at the home of cousins Tom (Thomas) Sawyer & Huck (Huckleberry) Finn, his alleged accomplices. All three are being held until a bail hearing is set.'
Not the most exciting. Now, if you had seen this story on the 6 o'clock news, it would have more spice. Different perspectives, eyewitnesses; the whole sewing kit.
All in the Family - If the words are related to the same idea, then you should keep them together. You shouldn't start a paragraph describing an event, cut in something else & finish the first idea four paragraphs later. I would need to re-read that at least four times just to catch up.
Double White Lines, Please - "I went to the store, to the movies & ran over a dog." What? Lines of confusion. Of course, cleaning the sentence to say you went 'to run over the dog' would definitely get the reader's attention. Keeping the beat of the sentence provides symmetry.
Push ups will not help - Your style is your own. You cannot fake it, bake it or make it happen. But, you can develop it, improve it & make it dance. Everyone has a distinct storytelling flavor. Find yours & all of the other bits will fall into place.
Happy Writing,
Patti
Tuesday, September 7, 2010
11 Character Building Moments
We all have character building moments in our lives. Decisions that shape who & what we are, how we react & ultimately what we will do in a given situation. Our characters also have these moments. And we, as their creators, have to give them depth & breadth to explore, grow & sometimes change.
Some important questions to ask your characters...
Where do you live? This is about time, place, country/region, living arrangements (parents, etc.). This is also about why he/she lives there & how they feel about it. If your hero lives in a trailer park with 15 children & no wife, then you as a writer have some material from which to build character & setting.
From where do you hail? If your trailer park hero (TPH) comes from a wealthy family, why he's chosen this path is integral to his character. This also plays a role in who his best friend is, where he works, the people he knows.
How old are ya? Age plays a vital role in attitudes & behaviors. If TPH is 85, he will not say, "Dude, where's my car?" He probably might start a conversation with, "In my day...."
What's in a name? A name is a label; it is indicative of upbringing, character, or character flaw. TPH, from a wealthy family, living in the trailer park could have the name Hyram Goodson. But his friends call him Hy or maybe they call him Ram. First & last names go together providing a sense of self or a delusion of self depending on how you tell the story. Pick up a book of names at your local library or even a phone book & see what happens.
Looks like rain? Physical characteristics tell us a lot about a person. Tall, vertically challenged, thin, rubenesque, etc. If TPH looked in the mirror what would he see? High school hero gone wrong, rich son turned social experimenter, disgruntled factory guy. How a character sees themselves & how we see them can sometimes be two different things. Give them the pen, they'll let you know.
Vat vas your childhood like? Sorry, Freudian joke. Supposing TPH came from money, what in his childhood caused him to run in the opposite direction. Did he get his high school girlfriend pregnant & get cut off? Did his parents fight over money? Was his mother an overbearing socialite insistent on good manners & bad affairs? Knowing from whence we come, determines where we are going.
What's your gig? Job, occupation, career. Each of these has a different meaning. A career woman is not the same as a salesclerk. CEOs have golden parachutes, vacation homes, IRAs. Career choice says a lot about your character. You're a writer & that says payloads about you. Self-motivated, goal-oriented, detail-oriented, creative, flexible, the list goes on.
Are you gonna pick that up buddy? Conflicts & change; the writers B&B. Passive-aggressive people do not, as a rule, go head-to-head with an adversary. But, maybe that's central to the struggle & pushing them to confrontation might be mission critical to your story. On the flip side, people who are confrontational don't go around grousing, they fight - bunches. Loud, gregarious, flamboyant even. Possibilities abound.
So, you got somebody special? And this isn't always the case. As a romance writer, my characters will have someone special. But, let's look at TPH - 15 kids, no wife. Um, he might not have time for a girlfriend or maybe he does. Depends on the story. But, how he interacts with others tells volumes about who he is as a person. If Flo three trailers down has been chasing him since his wife passed & he avoids her like mince meat pie, then we understand a bunch of different things about him.
What are your goals, son? Goals & motivations become the backbone of conflict in our stories. What your charcter wants, who he/she is & how they behave speak directly & conversely to this. For example, maybe TPH is a master of self-sabotage. Why? Because failure is not an option. But, maybe not trying is. So, he has to try, darn it. Or, the central conflict is lost.
What makes ya tic? Tics, those little things specific to each one of us. When you're nervous, happy, excited, angry what do you do? When I'm angry, my lips purse into a mottled concoction of lines reminiscent of too many lemons. That says something about how I deal with my own issues. And, it will say something about how your characters deal with theirs. Hand wringing, hair twirling, blank staring - all are indicative of character. If TPH makes a fist every time he gets agitated that says something about who he is, how he deals & what his typical reactions might be.
Go to a favorite spot, watch people. It's research, if anybody asks. The mall's always fun - variety & all. There are also psychology books on everything from birth to death. For more information on character, I also recommend Writer's Guide to Character Traits.
Happy Writing,
Patti
Some important questions to ask your characters...
Where do you live? This is about time, place, country/region, living arrangements (parents, etc.). This is also about why he/she lives there & how they feel about it. If your hero lives in a trailer park with 15 children & no wife, then you as a writer have some material from which to build character & setting.
From where do you hail? If your trailer park hero (TPH) comes from a wealthy family, why he's chosen this path is integral to his character. This also plays a role in who his best friend is, where he works, the people he knows.
How old are ya? Age plays a vital role in attitudes & behaviors. If TPH is 85, he will not say, "Dude, where's my car?" He probably might start a conversation with, "In my day...."
What's in a name? A name is a label; it is indicative of upbringing, character, or character flaw. TPH, from a wealthy family, living in the trailer park could have the name Hyram Goodson. But his friends call him Hy or maybe they call him Ram. First & last names go together providing a sense of self or a delusion of self depending on how you tell the story. Pick up a book of names at your local library or even a phone book & see what happens.
Looks like rain? Physical characteristics tell us a lot about a person. Tall, vertically challenged, thin, rubenesque, etc. If TPH looked in the mirror what would he see? High school hero gone wrong, rich son turned social experimenter, disgruntled factory guy. How a character sees themselves & how we see them can sometimes be two different things. Give them the pen, they'll let you know.
Vat vas your childhood like? Sorry, Freudian joke. Supposing TPH came from money, what in his childhood caused him to run in the opposite direction. Did he get his high school girlfriend pregnant & get cut off? Did his parents fight over money? Was his mother an overbearing socialite insistent on good manners & bad affairs? Knowing from whence we come, determines where we are going.
What's your gig? Job, occupation, career. Each of these has a different meaning. A career woman is not the same as a salesclerk. CEOs have golden parachutes, vacation homes, IRAs. Career choice says a lot about your character. You're a writer & that says payloads about you. Self-motivated, goal-oriented, detail-oriented, creative, flexible, the list goes on.
Are you gonna pick that up buddy? Conflicts & change; the writers B&B. Passive-aggressive people do not, as a rule, go head-to-head with an adversary. But, maybe that's central to the struggle & pushing them to confrontation might be mission critical to your story. On the flip side, people who are confrontational don't go around grousing, they fight - bunches. Loud, gregarious, flamboyant even. Possibilities abound.
So, you got somebody special? And this isn't always the case. As a romance writer, my characters will have someone special. But, let's look at TPH - 15 kids, no wife. Um, he might not have time for a girlfriend or maybe he does. Depends on the story. But, how he interacts with others tells volumes about who he is as a person. If Flo three trailers down has been chasing him since his wife passed & he avoids her like mince meat pie, then we understand a bunch of different things about him.
What are your goals, son? Goals & motivations become the backbone of conflict in our stories. What your charcter wants, who he/she is & how they behave speak directly & conversely to this. For example, maybe TPH is a master of self-sabotage. Why? Because failure is not an option. But, maybe not trying is. So, he has to try, darn it. Or, the central conflict is lost.
What makes ya tic? Tics, those little things specific to each one of us. When you're nervous, happy, excited, angry what do you do? When I'm angry, my lips purse into a mottled concoction of lines reminiscent of too many lemons. That says something about how I deal with my own issues. And, it will say something about how your characters deal with theirs. Hand wringing, hair twirling, blank staring - all are indicative of character. If TPH makes a fist every time he gets agitated that says something about who he is, how he deals & what his typical reactions might be.
Go to a favorite spot, watch people. It's research, if anybody asks. The mall's always fun - variety & all. There are also psychology books on everything from birth to death. For more information on character, I also recommend Writer's Guide to Character Traits.
Happy Writing,
Patti
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